05-10-2025, 08:51 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-10-2025, 08:52 AM by Flashlight237.)
((Maybe give us a little more writing to work with? The last line you wrote didn't really allow any room for progress, nor did it really move things along.))
((Compare that to Bound Cat's writings which try their best to make any sort of progress in their character's limited situation.))
Dawn noticed the rat. Now's her chance. Dawn moaned out to the rat. "Mmph..!" Dawn pointed at the ropes, then imitated a sawing motion with her index finger, as if to give the rat some sort of signal as to what she wants it to do.
(05-08-2025, 02:46 AM)Hisbraingoingthrough Wrote: The rat struggled a bit wiggling free from the grate.
((Compare that to Bound Cat's writings which try their best to make any sort of progress in their character's limited situation.))
Dawn noticed the rat. Now's her chance. Dawn moaned out to the rat. "Mmph..!" Dawn pointed at the ropes, then imitated a sawing motion with her index finger, as if to give the rat some sort of signal as to what she wants it to do.